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This is my first critique in a while so bear with me >w>

I really like a lot of things about this owo
I really do.
I love how you did the eyes, theyre so sparkly!
There are so many good things going on here :3

The expression is amazing >w>

One of my few complaints are about the anatomy. The legs should be longer, and the head should be smaller. The body could be a bit longer. She also doesn't appear to have much of a neck. You got a lot of it very well though, the tail is really great. Overall the anatomy is okay.

The tears look too opaque. Maybe outline them in white instead of coloring them in.

Something else is the shading. I understand shading can be difficult on darkly colored characters, but it's not very definite where it is in the picture. Pay a bit more attention to where th light is coming from and put it accordingly.

I really like the glow effect, though i feel you could have made it a bit more glowy and not as much streaky. unless you did that on purpose.

Another thing i like is that you actually took the time to write out the words instead of typing them. It makes it look much better :3

Very good job overall ^^

Hope i helped!
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:iconwaterstar29:
Waterstar29 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I think the anatomy looks fine, noting that its a Chibi. But I wouldve ended the chest where the stomach line begins on the other side of the leg....it would make it look a little better imo...but overall I alove this picture ^_^
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:icontreehs:
Treehs Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
are you critiquing my critique? XD
Yes i critiqued it mostly according to her style.
its goood >w>
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:iconwaterstar29:
Waterstar29 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Indeed it is ^_^

YAY FOR CRITIQUING TO THE NEXT LEVEL :D
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:icontreehs:
Treehs Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconwaterstar29:
Waterstar29 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconstudmuffinplz:
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:icontreehs:
Treehs Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg
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:iconwaterstar29:
Waterstar29 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Ohhhhhh yeaaaaaaah XD
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Heather-kat Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Thankyou :'D
But I still have a lot to work on so I appreciate all these tips .w.
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:iconwaterstar29:
Waterstar29 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem sweetheart :)

And btw, Did u draw ur icon? Cause I love ur icon....if I had points id probably request one :3 but im saving up for an adoptable...
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Heather-kat Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist


No Im afraid I didnt ;w;
I commission for them xD
But my friend made my icon. You can find her here: :iconmistdapple: ^^
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